Hi there! This is where we left off, in the dimly-lit living room of the Tachie-Mensons. The story continues…
‘W-what did you just say? You have got to be the most selfish person on this planet right now! We have 3 children and you are just going to walk away because it is too difficult to balance being Mummy with taking care of all your beloved clients?! This is not the woman I married!’, Frank spat out the words at her, clearly appalled at what he was hearing.
‘There is no need to raise your voice, Frank. You will wake the kids up!’
‘You are such a hypocrite, Korkor! Suddenly our kids are a priority, aren’t they?’
“Listen! I know it sounds extreme, but this is the only way that I can be myself without feeling like some Wicked Witch from the West. It is the only way I can plunge myself into work without worrying about you or the kids. Plus, with that, we can work out visitation hours. I will get to see them. It won’t be so bad.’
‘No, you listen! All I hear is me, I, myself. What about our kids? Junior is just 3, for Christ’s sake! What about me? Are we supposed to just go on without you? You think it is that easy? What kind of mother casually talks about leaving her home as if she is thinking about changing the colour of her bathroom tiles?’
‘Maybe you should get used to the fact that not every woman is fulfilled by just being a wife and a mother. Some of us actually want more than that. Why should I be the devil incarnate just because I also want to be happy? I don’t want to go and sit in front of some stranger and tell him about my childhood, and watch him analyze why our family is not picture-perfect. I am done, Frank.’
Frank was suddenly overwhelmed by a feeling of hopelessness. He sat with his head in his hands. When she attempted to walk past him, he held on to her arm and whispered, ‘Don’t go, K. Please don’t leave me.’ His plea was met with silence. She waited until he loosened his grip and then she walked away. She stopped in the hallway and said over her shoulder, ‘Don’t wait up for me tomorrow.’
When he was alone, he quietly began to sob.
Real nigga tears, like Mark called them.
Mark had never been too thrilled about the whole Korkor idea. He had always said that Korkor was too opinionated to be a submissive wife. Mark was honest to a fault- he would never tell a lie even if it meant losing his job. He met Mark when they were both studying for BECE and while everyone was giving funny excuses for not finishing their assignment, Mark simply told the truth- ‘I forgot because I was watching a match.’ Not very smart, considering the beating he got afterwards, but it was admirable. They became friends soon after that and Mark was always the go to person for an honest opinion. No garnishing or editing. The truth served cold.
‘Ma guy, you sure she bi wife? I no get the wife vibe oo. I mean, don’t get me wrong. She is fiiiiine, and I have tasted her jollof. Plus you know what they say about Krobo women in bed. But she seems too ambitious to just ‘abandon’ her dreams to raise your kids.’
That was the first thing he told Frank the day he met Korkor.
‘Oh, we have talked about it. We will strike a balance.’
‘That’s not a smart move. Right now, both of you are on Cloud 9, so you are just saying things to make each other happy. I don’t mind an ambitious wife, but then again, I am not big on family like you are. What is going to happen when she has to make a choice? Can you guarantee that she will choose family over a promising career?’
Mark was right. How could I be this gullible?
Frank woke up in the arm chair around 4am. The painful memories from last night hit him, one after the other. He had cried himself to sleep- Mark would be disappointed. He quickly climbed up the stairs to take a quick shower before the kids woke up.
The room was empty.
She was gone.
Along with two weeks’ worth of clothes.
Typical! She didn’t even have the courage to face her children. Leaving me to do all the hard work.
He told the kids that she had gone on a business trip and that she would be back soon.
‘She didn’t even say bye-bye?’, Junior asked tearfully.
‘It was an emergency. She will be back.’
I hope so.
He hated lying to the kids, but even he was not ready to accept the truth. He avoided Aku like the plague. This wasn’t the time for impromptu erections, he had a family to save. Of course, it was Mark who discovered his secret. He caught him in a weak moment- watching her sing and dance with Junior.
Mark pulled him to the study for a serious talking to.
‘Is this why Korkor left?’
‘Ah, but you paa? Korkor doesn’t know.’
‘Maybe that is the problem. If she knew that her absence from home was making you lust after the help, she would have moved back home tonight. Herh, we were all here when she came oo. She had body odour and she didn’t know how to use a toothbrush. Frank paa?!’
‘At least she loves my kids.’
‘Akwa wei paa! Listen to yourself! I also love your kids, does that give you an erection? Nonsense! I will not allow you to stoop this low. Look, I know you are in a rough place but even if, for some bizarre reason, we allow you to end up with Aku, you think taking care of your kids will be enough? I know you, bruh! Intelligence is your biggest aphrodisiac. Does she have an opinion on the effect of colonization on Africa in the 21st century?’
Frank laughed. It was his first genuine laugh in the longest time. It felt good.
‘So what should I do? Should I send her away?’
‘No, it is already tough on the kids without their mother. She knows how to take care of them. Work on yourself and quit losing your head just because your maid knows how to calm your 3 year old son’s nerves. We will get through this. Don’t make things any more complicated.’
That evening, Vanessa came to her father’s room and sat on his bed.
‘Mummy is gone, isn’t she?’
‘Nessa, why do you ask?’
‘Because it’s been three weeks since she left. She hasn’t called once and you are always sad. Don’t worry. We will be fine. We are not doing too badly, are we?’
Reaching over to embrace his daughter, Frank was struck by the strength that his children had displayed over the past three weeks. None of them asked too many questions or nagged. They weren’t perfect, but they were okay. As for Aku, she was none the wiser. There was a time when he had dreamt that he had a weak moment. At least, he thought so. Aku had come into his study to turn off the lights because he had fallen asleep behind his books. He pulled her onto his lap and said, ‘Don’t leave. Stay with us. The kids need you. I need you.’ She wiggled her way out of his grasp and made for the door. The poor girl was probably scandalized. Even now, he wasn’t sure if it was a dream or not, because when he woke up the next morning, he found one of her slippers under the table. She never brought it up and for that, he was thankful. If it ever came up, he could just feign innocence and say that he thought it was Korkor.
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Two months later…
Constance popped her head into Korkor’s office.
‘They would like to schedule a conference call at 8pm. Should I go ahead and confirm your availability?’
She stared at the family portrait they had taken last year- all 5 of them. They all looked so happy, all of them except her. Her smile didn’t reach her eyes. Sometimes she missed the kids crawling into their bed on Saturday mornings, and Junior’s peanut butter-stained fingers holding on to her, but it didn’t come with the aching loss that staying away from her job would have brought her. She would have probably always wondered, ‘What if?’
I made the right choice. At least now I am happy.
Turning the picture face down, she smiled at Constance and said, ‘Sure! Why not? It is not like I have anywhere else to be.’
Story continues here…
‘Akwa wei paa! Listen to yourself! I also love your kids, does that give you an erection? Nonsense!
Hahahahahahahaha…charlie…dat was a good line Keni…i admire e boiz-boiz vibe in there…soo real!
Thumbs up!
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😀😀thanks Edem!
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For me, the strength of the children was overwhelming especially Vanessa. Great sequel Keni. You rock!!!!
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Thank you boss!!
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my birthday present was late but it was worth the wait. Thank you sweets
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Always welcome hun!
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In fact I bore… Edieben.. Mtchew… Abeg Frank please marry Aku, let her get back in school and jux see the brain she becomes, you wouldn’t even miss Korkor.
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😂😂😂 relax for Korkor eh?
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Grt sequel Keni..amazing as always
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Thanks Hun! You always read and leave a comment. I value the feedback
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Awwww. Poor Frank, but he def should be alright
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Yeah, I hope so
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This story is dope. It’s always good to have some Mark’s in your life. If intelligence is what you value above all else you should never compromise. Waiting for the sequel
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Lol! The sequel word again? Glad you enjoyed it, Kefi!
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Korkor is getting miserable but too proud to admit that..
Keni Pls do me a favor n mke korkor as miserable as sthn..! Hehehehe..I love it hon
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😂😂payback paa nie?!
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Frank will survive,with or without Korkor and that’s a good thing.I just love Mark and his vibe:-) Don’t we all need friends like that? As to whether ”Aku’s” incidence was a dream or not,we bless
God she ran out of his arms. Well done Keni
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Yep, we all need a Mark in our lives!
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Eeeeermmm…abeg ooh, there’s part 3 abi ?! 👀👀
And oo…there’s someone here with a name almost lime mine.
This Korkor lady is so heartless though. I hope such human beings, don’t exist for real.
Great story Keni. And it will get even better when you’ve given us the part 3 😋
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Ei Kenikodjo readers! Part 3?😧
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Korkor…korkor…korkor…How many times did I call you? Please tell her she’ll live to regret this if she doesn’t change her mind fast. Keni should I expect more? 🙂
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You called her 3 times! 😊
About expecting more, well we will just have to wait and see..
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Reblogged this on Nii Sai Schandorf and commented:
Part II of that interesting story
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😊😊
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Enjoyed it thoroughly. You’re a good writer who tells a real-to-life story. I can’t wait for part 3.
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Thank you Sidney! 😊
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Thank you Sidney. You are also in the Part 3 group?😧
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Yes. Part III is eagerly expected
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When is part III please? ?😠😠
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Haha! Naa, we will just have to wait and see
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This Korkor lady must know that,after her retirement, that is when she will know the importance of family.She us too obsessed with her career. mtcheeew
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Lol! Anti-Korkor camp member😊
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Korkor is so mean
I fynk she will soon b invited to her husbands second wedding wif d help
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Haha, plot twist!
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Aaawww mehn! Akwa wei paa.
I have a friend almost in this same situation
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Oh really? I hope he/she finds a solution soon.
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another part! :-).. can’t wait to finish this piece. Great job done!
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Thank you Davina. Interesting name! Mind if i use it in a story?
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Loved this..but I hope this is not the end
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Haha, Geoffrey! We will just have to wait and see
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Sadly, there are so many families going this way. Too many of us think much more about our own happiness than about the happiness of those we claim to love….
Good Job!
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This generation is a lot more self-seeking than the ones before it. Sad, isn’t it? Thanks for reading, Elise
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This is a great piece. Your characters are just on point. Though i’m not enjoying Korkor’s life, i must admit she makes this story just right. Please don’t leave us in suspense for long. Part III please. Happy birthday in advance too.
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Thank you for reading Nana Yaa!! 🙂
Special thanks for the birthday wishes as well!
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Impromptu. ..lool but korkor your head is hard papa
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Lol!! Relax for Korkor eh?
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Glad Korkor didn’t smash the family picture but turned face down.
She will soon realise the new woman in herself.
Good part 2.
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Haha! Thanks Daddy
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korkor truly went by her words ……. poor Frank…… he entered the love business with a gr8 intensity and I believe he will leave with the same intensity he entered with. I can forsee korkor sobbing like Frank is doing now……. the future holds the rest of the story.
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At least you are not asking for a sequel
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😀😀
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another good piece Keni, keep it up! and I like ur name, KENIKODJO.
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Thank you madam!
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Mark is my guy….. I always have to make time and read your stories…God bless you😊
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Thanks Janet! I appreciate the support
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At this rate de3, we’ll be calling for more sequels oo
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Frank, don’t do that!
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As for this I want a sequel of sequels. You hear me keni? In fact I want want a series. OK. This particular story has not ended at all. Intact start ryt now. Part 3 oya! And a happy bday to you keni.
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Lol!! Ei amanfuor! Thanks for the birthday wishes
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Keni, kwame nkrumah’s twin sister, happy birthday wai.
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Thank you Maame!
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Hmmm it is sad i bear the same name as the villainess. we usually do not know the essence of family until it is often too late. great story!! please let us know how it goes with Korkor. you know what this is right? yeah!! u got it right!! a call for a sequel!!!! #winkwink
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Haha, we will see!
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oh and that comment about krobo women in bed though…. mmmmmmmm no comment!!
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Haha, I plead the 5th!
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where’s Keni, pls let’s start searching….n…she’s been silent for long.
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Hehe, I am right here!
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My goodness you are good!!! great story. waiting for part 3 yh!
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Thanks Delali for reading! This is your first comment, if I am not mistaken. Welcome to the family 🙂
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Great story dear.though u left us hanging. Smh. Am sure u enjoy doing dat. Part 3 pls. 🙂
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Haha! Ei madam, you too?!
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Please Keni i’m waiting………………….for Part3 oooooooooooo
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Haha, we will see what God will do 🙂
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Am still tryn to understand how any mother can give up her kids over her career. Anyway great story keni.pls drop the part 3
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Hard to believe but women like her exist oo!
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Good Job keni! Mehnn….just cnt keep calm! Part 3 where are u?
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Keep calm, it is coming!
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I’ve always heard about how good a writer you are but never really taken the time to read your stories. I think it’s just “Till death do us part” I read some time ago but decided to read one you posted on your Facebook timeline. I ended reading most of the other stories yesterday and even this morning. Just couldn’t help but to keep reading. Now this is my conclusion: You are a GENIUS!
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Awww! Thank you Eben! I am grinning from ear to ear
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great piece from a krobo woman. part iii please.
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Haha, Part 3 is here now. Thanks for reading😊
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great work
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Thanks! 😊😊
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Great work Keni! But Auntie Korkor too! Them papers won’t give you a hug when you need it most ooo. Hmm…
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U r really a great writer Keni. I just luv ur stories. Way to go girl…
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Thank you my madam 😊
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Thoughtful, true, relating, honestly I just can’t find the words to describe this. You.are a writer. I simply say, Keep writing K.
Love every line.
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Awww thanks Kay! 😊😊
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Are you Ghanaian?? Waow. May God by this gift take you places.
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Yes please! I am very Ghanaian!😊 People ask me that all the time. Oh, and amen!
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Is there a third part?..lol
I clicked on archives and ive read ALL your stories from 2014 till now plus know thy man..im hooked!..its 1 am and i can’t stop…
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Binge reading!! 😍😍😍
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Glad i found this blog. I’m now your unofficial groupie.
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😂😂😂 groupie huh? We will see how that works. You are the celeb, remember?
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I know I’m late to this story and all, but it’s 👍🏽👍🏽. Mark seems like a very interesting person. And the part about Aku’s body odor and the toothbrush really cracked me up. 😂😂😂
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Better late than never, Atswei! This is one of my personal favourites. And yes, Mark is pretty interesting.
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